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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: .......... Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:05 pm | |
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Last edited by Soulstealer on Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:15 pm; edited 10 times in total (Reason for editing : I got some feed back and i took it under consideration.) | |
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Mazen Owner
Posts : 25 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2012-02-20
| Subject: Re: .......... Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:23 pm | |
| Good Luck with your application. Myself along with the rest of the LiteMS Staff are now reviewing & discussing if they like your application then you will be put into a poll to let the players vote. | |
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CherryChanga Changalicious
Posts : 153 Reputation : 2 Join date : 2012-02-23 Location : N/A
| Subject: Re: .......... Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:40 pm | |
| First of all I just want to say welcome back, Soul! In response to the application, I believe that you could be a bit less charismatic with some of your wording. For example, you state "wonderful staff" instead of just "staff" which is usually implying that you're trying to get on the good side of whoever reads the application. Charisma is a good thing to use in an application, but I think that it's best to use it a bit more subtly than that. Also, saying that you think you deserve the job of GM is kind of a given, otherwise you wouldn't be applying. Asides from those nitpicks, the application is strong and definitely has your voice behind it. Good job. | |
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Tsuna Administrator
Posts : 49 Reputation : 2 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 26 Location : Lost Around The World
| Subject: Re: .......... Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:44 pm | |
| Well, it is a good application, and its surprising the fact that you can play 2-4 hours with those grades o-o (they are not bad, they are very good) even though your at eigth now, right? You forgot that you need evidence to be able to ban someone though Anything else, the application is nice and well organized Good luck with your application ^^
Last edited by Tsuna on Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:50 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:46 pm | |
| - CherryChanga wrote:
- First of all I just want to say welcome back, Soul! In response to the application, I believe that you could be a bit less charismatic with some of your wording. For example, you state "wonderful staff" instead of just "staff" which is usually implying that you're trying to get on the good side of whoever reads the application. Charisma is a good thing to use in an application, but I think that it's best to use it a bit more subtly than that. Also, saying that you think you deserve the job of GM is kind of a given, otherwise you wouldn't be applying. Asides from those nitpicks, the application is strong and definitely has your voice behind it. Good job.
Thanks alot man.. i apreciate you taking the time to read my application.. and i also thought that charima part.. but i'm like what the heck, lets just give them some comeplements i also put i believe i should be given the gm spot just to make sure people aren't lost XD XD no i'm kidding thanks for your help.. i'll make those changes . like the feed back | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:48 pm | |
| - Tsuna wrote:
- Well, it is a good application, and its surprising
the fact that you can play 2-4 hours with those grades o-o (they are not bad, they are very good) You forgot that you need evidence to be able to ban someone though Anything else, the application is nice and well organized Good luck with your application ^^ thanks for the feed back guys.. i'll take everything under consideration.. | |
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Smittens Postaholic
Posts : 150 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:03 am | |
| Welcome back soul (if u remember me that is xD) and gl ^_^ | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:13 am | |
| - Smittens wrote:
- Welcome back soul (if u remember me that is xD) and gl ^_^
How could i not remember you? SMITTEEENNNS And thankss | |
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Cookie Newbie
Posts : 8 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-24
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 3:44 pm | |
| Lol you doesent Followed The Format you have to be 13! you guys should Denied him cause if he get accepted and Gm Spots are again Open all would dont follow The format | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:23 pm | |
| - Cookie wrote:
- Lol you doesent Followed The Format you have to be 13!
you guys should Denied him cause if he get accepted and Gm Spots are again Open all would dont follow The format Funny thing is i'll be thirteen in like 15 days.. and i have been allowed by the owner him self.. i've worked hard for gm position.. iv'e played with mazen for over 5-6 months. | |
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Jacob Developer
Posts : 6 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:31 pm | |
| 2-4 hours at grade 7 isnt much i think u should increase that by a bit. I am a thumbs down. | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:39 pm | |
| - Jacob wrote:
- 2-4 hours at grade 7 isnt much i think u should increase that by a bit. I am a thumbs down.
well it's depending what day.. weekends i'll try to play like 5-7 hours... school days i think that is a good amount... i'm not saying thats it... i'm saying around. | |
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andy789456 Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:48 pm | |
| Stop argueing. Take it to considerate. | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:49 pm | |
| - andy789456 wrote:
- Stop argueing. Take it to considerate.
i am.. ....... | |
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CherryChanga Changalicious
Posts : 153 Reputation : 2 Join date : 2012-02-23 Location : N/A
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Sat Feb 25, 2012 2:58 pm | |
| Here i bumped up the time.
Last edited by Soulstealer on Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:40 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Soulstealer Beginner
Posts : 14 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2012-02-23
| Subject: Re: .......... Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:55 pm | |
| - CherryChanga wrote:
- Jacob wrote:
- 2-4 hours at grade 7 isnt much i think u should increase that by a bit. I am a thumbs down.
Way to be a downer, man. That's more time than I spend online, and I've been a legit GM for this server before as well as multiple others. I try, i mean 2-4 around, that doesn't mean always in that area, but jacob has his opinions and i bumped up the time to try and get a better result from him..... | |
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